What’s a memory? Is it good or bad?
Well, there are many different types of memories, but the ones that I like to remember
are good memories. This is something that stays in your heart forever and you
love to remember it and when you think about it you find yourself with a huge
smile upon your face.
When I think of a memory, there is one
that always seems to pop into my mind right away. It was the first time my mom
had left me with my sisters so she could go to the store. But, I never got
along with them when I was smaller so I decided that I was going to leave the
house without them seeing me so I could go to the store to because I wanted
fruit snacks and I didn’t know if my mom would remember to pick them up for me.
So there I was, 7 years old and walking to the store by myself. I thought that I
was the coolest person ever, then once I hit main street a cop spotted me and
asked me where I was headed and once I told him he made me get into the back of
the police car so that he could take me back home because I was obviously too
young to be out and about by myself. Everyone thought this was horrible, but
once he dropped me off he allowed me to see the whole vehicle and he even
turned on the lights and sirens on so that I could see and hear them. So you
see, this was something that I had always wished to do but never had the chance
till that day. Even though I was not allowed to play with my dolls for a week
because that was my punishment I would never take back that day for anything
because even though it was wrong to leave the house I had finally fulfilled my
dream to see that police car. That is why this was my favorite memory.
Even though a memory can be small and
big doesn’t mean that it’s not special to someone. Thinking about their own
memory could be the only thing putting a smile on their face every day. So
remember, live for the moment because you never know if that one thing you’re
doing can lead to one of the greatest memories of your life.
I really liked how you had an introduction and a conclusion that matched. It made it easy to understand the beginning and end without having to guess. I also thought your story was really funny, especially after reading Katlyn's! Haha they are a lot alike! Good job, I really had that image in my head!
ReplyDeleteAwwh! That was such a well written post! I love how structured your writing is. It is very easy to follow and it makes your blog fun to read. I enjoyed the actual story as well. (: Very good!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job Brandee! I liked your introduction and conclusion and it really tied everything together! It was very enjoyable to read and it make me laugh. I could see everything happening as I was reading.
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