Mine would be a warm
place with palm trees and sand right next to an ocean. I could go there to
clear my head and think wonderful thoughts and maybe even write and read a
couple good books. But there is a lot more than just that, I could go to
aquariums to see and discover all new variations of fish that I have never seen
before in a small town in North Dakota. So even while taking a vacation I would
still be learning new and interesting things. But every vacation needs a fun
experience and I would like to learn to surf, even though it will take a lot of
dedication, time, and money, I believe it would be worth it. It can teach me
that even though I might fail a couple times I will need to get up and keep
going to reach a goal that I have set for myself. I would also need to try
something very out of the norm for me; I would probably choose to try a fresh coconut.
Even though I don’t like fake coconut I feel as if I need to try a real one to
see if they are any better even if they do look like a ball with fur on them. A
vacation doesn’t just need to be relaxing; it needs to be fun as well because
everything needs zest.
This is my dream
vacation that I one day hope and pray to go on. Even if it doesn’t happen soon
or in the near future, I will be fine with that but it will have to be in this
life time. So don’t be afraid to go and experience new places and new
adventures take the extra step to make your vacation a memorable one that will
not only stay in your mind but also inside your heart.
That was super deep Brandee! I really liked how you gave your blog a definate body. You had an idea in mind and you stuck to it throughout your blogs intirety. I also liked that you didn't give it a time limit, it makes it more realistic!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your intro! I also thought you did a good job of really describing everything you would want to do on your vacation. If you do go on this vacation I'm going to be super jealous!!!! I have always wanted to learn how to surf. I really enjoyed this post and can't wait to hear your next one!
ReplyDeleteBrandee, The place you create in you vacation is interesting because it's almost like you can take that vacation in your mind by just looking out a window.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job Brandee! I really liked your introduction and your conclusion. You also did a very good job explaning what you were going to do and I really liked how you talked about the adventures you were going to take like, learning how to surf and trying a coconut. I really hope you will be able to take this vacation eventually! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job with describing your dream vacation, because as I was reading it, it was like I experience it in my head. The exact describtions of everything what you want to do and to see are really good, and detailed. I really hope you get this chance at any time, because I can see that you really thought more than once about that.
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