There
are many things that we expect to get out of life. You want to be loved and
accepted by everyone. But, sometimes that’s not meant to be. Everyone goes
through life differently and we all are made differently. There are males and
females, but that’s not all. There are personalities, which make us who we are
and determine what we live for. There are a lot of things that can go wrong
through our life span, but there is one thing that is certain: We will all make
mistakes. To go through life you have to pick yourself back up and learn from
those mistakes. We have to make sure that what we once did will never happen
again.
We
are also going to hurt many people that we love, be it a friend, mom/dad,
brother/sister, or grandma/grandpa. We have to make our decisions very
cautiously so that we don’t damage any relationships for a full time. If we do
during that process we have to grow stronger from that experience and keep on
moving. There are always going to be people that will never understand the things
that some of us go through.
Some
of the things are not just person to person it could be you battling with
yourself thinking that you are worthless and that you don’t deserve to live.
Well, those voices inside of your head are wrong. You have to shake them away
and believe in your heart that you are good enough and there is always going to
be a place on Earth for you. You are here for a reason. There are going to be
times that you are going to want to hurt yourself, but you have to be a bigger
person and get help before that happens. Physical pain is not any better than
emotional pain. Once you have done the terrible action to yourself all of that
emotional pain will come back and hit a lot worse than it did before. Nothing
can stop the pain unless you face it head on and get through all of it because
no matter what you do it will always come back.
Life
is more than most people think, it takes time to perfect your lifestyle. There
has to be times that saying no and getting away from the bad is the way to go.
Nothing can save you from life itself but being yourself and never giving up is
one thing that will make you live a more successful life rather than moping
around. When there are hard times you have to be willing to get through them.
If life was easy then it wouldn’t be life. It would simply just be a phase.

This is really good. You made a lot of good points, but I noticed you used a lot of yous. Other than that, everything you said made sense and it all went together really well. The picture added more to it also. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour blogs are always so inspirational and well planned out! I love your writing style and your own personal voice shows through very well. I feel like you are just talking in a normal conversation. Great work! Also the visual aid helped me put a mental picture to your words! Nice job! (:
ReplyDeleteI think out of all the creative writing people, you have the most inspirational blog. I was actually going to try to write about making mistakes this week, but I couldn't do it. I'm impressed by you every week. You are very good at writing all of your emotoins down! I loved the first paragraph! It made me want to read more! Good Job, Brandee!
ReplyDeleteBrandee, you have a very compassionate heart. Being able to genuinely encourage others in your writing has it's own specific genre--like your peers mentioned inspirational. People find hope and comfort in that type of writing. You specifically selected to address an audience and personalize it through the use of "you." That is okay in this instance. Careful to proof read.
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